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Strawberry

STRAWBERRY Can you feel the warmness of the sun, reflecting off the red tones of my hair. The sun touching the edge of my toes! My seasons true nature ignited by a layer of flares. Can you feel the stars shine for me at night? While the moon beams a color of envy. Can you see me lost underneath the crimson tide in the clouds. Some where out there my eyes wonder for you. Can you feel the fresh bruise in my strawberry heart? As it bleeds every day just for you! Wondering if life can ever be sweet like sugar and glue. Crying under the night and its skies is how it would seem. Lost in a midnight red field in a forever dream. Can you feel the texture of my wounds? They feel rugged like rocky mountain sour berries. Covered in daiquiri as I drown under the rivers current. Attracting canaries to enjoy my wild strawberries. Can you feel the wings of my broken dreams? Here I am falling off the cliff and the feeling of love. Abandoned like a batch of strawberries for its flaws. Do you see me standing with a sad look. Can I show you all them hammer hits I took. That will be the end of story, to my book. How my strawberries have beauty that you over looked. by; p.d.

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Skat A

Date: 2/4/2016 11:05:00 PM

fileds forever **SKAT**

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/9/2014 6:29:00 PM

I am tired but I am working the list honey, working the list.

Date: 8/9/2014 10:13:00 AM

Who is venturous to overlook your protagonist beautyberry..nice Ch v ramana

Tim Smith

Date: 7/18/2014 9:45:00 PM

I do love a beautiful strawberry...I will add the sugar :)

Chris G. Vaillancourt

Date: 1/22/2014 7:42:00 AM

Some amazing word usage within this piece - It definitely has allure and charm. I give you credit for this fine, fine piece.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2013 12:10:00 AM

PD I thought I had seen all your poems. Maybe I saw this before. I am too lazy to look through your many comments and see if this is one of yours I'd seen already. But anyway, I love this one. Very nice!!

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/5/2011 2:08:00 AM

A highly imaginative write, full of vivid images! Powerful emotions are beautifully conveyed here.

Gabrielle Alcazaren

Date: 5/1/2011 5:03:00 PM

It's so appropriate that you began everything with "can you feel" because this explores such a variety of sensations, tastes and textures, I love that. And I also like the motif of the color red and the strawberries.

Michelle Campbell

Date: 5/1/2011 4:56:00 PM

Really love the poem; could relate. Thank you for commenting on my poem

Anne Rutherford

Date: 4/30/2011 7:39:00 AM

PD. brilliant , a wonderful and delightful poem to read. going to my favoutite poems. Anne

Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.

Date: 4/29/2011 4:07:00 PM

Love the read, love the write. Great job here!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/29/2011 11:22:00 AM

oh wow, that is so cool that I come ti mind when you see typos :D -- honestly I find that cool-- I have a friend who thinks of me with the mention of chocolate , lol :) go post a new write already-- oh btw-- I think you will be seeing Chris' cat poem in the hot list soon, lol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/29/2011 10:59:00 AM

oh btw-- I love how you say Postos!! lol-- will keep that in mind-- maybe typos & postos are siblings??? lol :D

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/29/2011 10:57:00 AM

this title caught my eye-- now I want strawberry pie (ok not really, wanted it to rhyme, I really want strawberry cheesecake!!) -- and lol, Burger Body, that is the first time I heard of that!! my, I bet Burger King will love you ;) let's go find him for you, where is he?? gosh you got me laughing so much! I think I also got me a burger body, buns, buns everywhere lol O_o

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 4/29/2011 9:35:00 AM

* Hi * i have been wishing to visit with * your lovely light * ever since i viewed your amazing blog * you are sooo beautiful * and i simply love everything about this * sweeet strawberries poem * straight from the sanguines heart of * a perfumed treasure * dipped in spellbindings * Soul Stirring Red * two jewels for the price of one crowned in faves * simply beauty * upon such beauty * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * sarah

Desiree M

Date: 4/26/2011 8:31:00 PM

This is a very beautifully written poem. Only a talented poet is capable of expressing pain in words so well when suffering that much. Concerning my soul mate, well 6 years went by and we are still trying to go strong. Things get really rough and weird sometimes, but lust+karmic connection+love wins over us all the time ... We have extremely incompatible tempers though ;)

James Foulk

Date: 4/23/2011 8:08:00 PM

a great write that is for sure, enjoyed reading it. thank you for reading and commenting on Tender Heart, Tender Soul. it was a made up story but could have happend to me or anyone else i quess.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/26/2011 9:27:00 AM

oh shucks, pd-- I really felt the sadness in this one-- and totally could see the relation to strawberries, especially the bruised part-- and ah I think I remember seeing you with red highlights-- I sure do hope that you are feeling ok? or better? that last stanza just made it all sadder :(--- ok catch you soon ok if you just need to vent? hugs to you!

Manouchka Doreus

Date: 3/25/2011 11:11:00 AM

consistent with the metaphor... love the repetition... good job

Kaylan Gebo

Date: 3/23/2011 3:17:00 PM

i dont understand

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/23/2011 8:28:00 AM

This is beautiful and touched my heart with sadness. I like the way you used it in reference to strawberries which is very different but works wonderfully. Well penned and very unique. love phyl

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 3/20/2011 11:47:00 AM

Beautifully penned, p.d. Sadness and melancholy. You might be be "standing with a sad look", which breaks the hearts of many here! God's blessings to you! Mikki

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/20/2011 9:10:00 AM

My Dear, I am so sadded by your loss, My sister also made her share of mistakes in life and I too hope he took her for a good reason. My heart and prayers go right to your warm strong heart. All I can tell you is we learn to cope with it and do our best.. My heart again breaks for your tears.. your in my thoughts..luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/18/2011 6:08:00 PM

Hey PD my BFF on top of the HOT POEMS chart luv.. WOW.. u did it again..luv.. way to go..

Wandering Butterfly

Date: 3/15/2011 4:31:00 PM

I love that you refrenced your heart with strawberries, very unique of you...as our hearts can be sweet and sour like a strawberry...eh? precious P.D., Love Miranda, (I would love to see some of your words written in my contest)