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Stove - For Contest

I’m smooth and sleek with cute curves I always manage to attract your attention You can’t wait to get your hands on me ... Know all the right buttons to press I can feel my temperature rising Sometimes I can get so steamy You can hear me hiss with excitement At times I have been known to bubble over I can feel myself burning with desire to please you Oh man I can get so so hot With your deft fingertips you can control me Soon my job is done and you are totally satisfied When it’s all over you leave me to cool down Then you can’t wait to caress me with a damp cloth Oh how I love it when you do that I just can't wait until you turn me on again Contest ~Tribute to a Major Appliance Sponsor ~Mary Oliver Rotman 09~10~15

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/1/2016 10:33:00 AM

Very very creative, had me smiling, and super congrats on the Win!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2016 11:28:00 AM

Many thanks Arthur its an old poem but still makes me smile:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/13/2015 1:04:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/13/2015 3:03:00 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 10/10/2015 12:05:00 PM

Jan,, Congrats on your win. **SKAT**

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2015 1:58:00 PM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/9/2015 5:39:00 PM

Back to congratulate you good job!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2015 5:41:00 PM

Thanks Eve I'm so glad Mary enjoyed my poem:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 10/9/2015 1:24:00 PM

You are a smooth and sleek writer, Jan! Your ability to play on words is remarkable:) Congratulations on this deserved win! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2015 1:25:00 PM

LOL Paul... I hope I have curves in the right place too lol:-) hugs Jan xx

George Aul

Date: 10/9/2015 11:04:00 AM

Told you it was a great, sexy poem. Congrats, Jan............... George

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2015 11:18:00 AM

Aww thanks George I'm delighted Mary liked it:-) hugs Jan xx

Dan Cwiak

Date: 10/9/2015 10:37:00 AM

Wow...wants to make me start thinking about how my bed must feel. Great win!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2015 10:41:00 AM

Thanks Dan :-) hugs Jan xx

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/9/2015 9:50:00 AM

So funny how you were able turn the stove into an x-rated appliance !! LOL ! Congratulations, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2015 10:04:00 AM

LOL Carrie I wasn't sure if it was too hot for the contest I'm please Mary liked my take on the theme:-) hugs Jan xx

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 10/9/2015 9:12:00 AM

Congratulations in your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2015 9:15:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by with yur congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/9/2015 8:54:00 AM

Congratulations on a well-deserved win! I remember enjoying this poem very much and thought I had commented. Don't know what happened there. I think it's great and have since I first read it ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2015 9:01:00 AM

Thanks CayCay I was worried it may be a little toooo hit lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/9/2015 8:17:00 AM

Hi Jan, congratulations on your 2nd Place win! I knew this one would be on top first time I read it! Hugs, Sanda

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2015 8:21:00 AM

Thanks so much Sandra I am delighted to place so high I thought it may be a little toooooo hot lol:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2015 2:10:00 PM

Ooo to be a Stove ;-) nice one Jan. I'll never be able to look the Stove in the eye again, hugs//James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2015 2:19:00 PM

LOL Thanks James:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/11/2015 12:02:00 PM

Wow, Jan! This is fabulous! You have such great imagination! I can see this at the top! Hugs, 7+Fav, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2015 1:45:00 PM

Thanks Sandra just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts

Date: 9/11/2015 2:37:00 AM

loved it Jan, made me laugh out loud...Seren

Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2015 2:53:00 AM

Thanks Seren I had fun with this one:-) hugs jan xx

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/11/2015 2:04:00 AM

Hi Jan I love how your subject was constructed... Your magical pen is eloquence; makes the reader to inhale its beautiful and intoxicated their mind and sense. Your write has turned me into a drunkard lol!. Great work, good luck in the contest dear poet......lovely...........A.M.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2015 2:52:00 AM

LOL drunk on my words now that is a first:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2015 9:23:00 PM

just reading this one again. wish I could remember how you did it the first time, Jan!! Maurice down here sure uses big words!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2015 2:51:00 AM

I adore Maurice's humour Andrea and thanks for dropping by again:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 9/10/2015 9:01:00 PM

Novel subject and only you could have pulled this delightful poem off. It has to be a winner in my book. Never realized a stove (or range, as we say here in the USA) could be written anthropomorphically! Thanks for reading about my poem on Mildred. / M

Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2015 2:50:00 AM

I had fun with this one Maurice I just hope its not too hot for the contest lol:-) hugs Jan xx