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STOP read my christmas poem

What is that
in our western sky
some kind of star
coming near by

it's radiance seems
as bright as the sun
but bowing to the night
it's beauty for reason

so compelling that
star in the sky
it's dazzling light
amazes my eye's

that star without words
beacons me to follow
my soul being bared
for something sacred and hollowed

Yes that is the star
our ancestors spoke of
i can see it with my eye's
that star is filled with love

quick quick hurry let's go
follow that star
where ever it goes

whether near 
or whether far
no matter what 
follow that star

for it was told
by ancient and old
that star would bring
our God and King

can't you see
this wonderful thing
Gods birth on earth
is where this star beams

there in the distance
gathered are the shepards
the lowly lowly shepards
soon to be joined by kings

"all men of the earth"
the angels did sing

to such a lowly place
this star did us bring
to a child born 
in the company cattle
but worshiped by kings
accompanied by the light
of that stars wonderful beam

a lowly lowly place
for the birth of the King of Kings
the place long for told
as the birth place of the King

we were humbled
by the mystery of this birth

this is the way 
God would visit earth

with lowly shepards
under a bright bright star
humbled to be like us
to be near not far

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  1. Date: 1/15/2014 9:49:00 PM
    JOHN, Congrats, with your EPIC CHRISTMAS is winning poem... TAKE CARE :) ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 1:16:00 PM
    hi John congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 4:34:00 AM
    Enjoyed your epic poem and congrats on the win, John

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 2:48:00 AM
    My heartfelt congratulations my dear friend, john ! Biggest hugs! Thank you so much for your support. Happy, Happy New Year and Advance Happy Three Kings! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 11:53:00 PM said skip this... What did you mean....pd

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 4:05:00 PM
    A wonderful reminder of what the star represents. Happy 2012 to you . Love phyl

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 6:54:00 AM
    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours John iii. Love and blessings, Carol

  1. Date: 12/3/2011 4:38:00 AM
    There is a genuine reverence John in your poem . Superb writing.

  1. Date: 11/28/2011 7:35:00 AM
    nicely done. you followed that star all the way to Jesus and i like how you took us with you on your journey. a great reminder of why we celebrate xmas for the upcoming season :)

  1. Date: 11/27/2011 2:41:00 PM
    Great testimony of your faith..Enjoyed reading..Soup mail..Sara

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 8:17:00 PM
    Very nice John, the Christmas story never is stale. We need the reminder more often.

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 3:58:00 PM
    Yes John, a beautiful reminder of the true spirit of Christmas!

  1. Date: 11/25/2011 2:04:00 PM
    loved it!! very good. Thanks for your warm comments of my work.. cory

  1. Date: 11/24/2011 8:51:00 AM
    Lovely write, enjoyed it, John

  1. Date: 11/24/2011 7:01:00 AM
    Hi John, You've out shined yourself with this one. I am sure a holiday contest will come, it's bound to be a winner! Happy Thanksgiving! Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 11/23/2011 5:10:00 PM
    john, you are right that guys have a favorite fun way to die, but fat guys might prefer with food! hahaha.

  1. Date: 11/23/2011 4:35:00 AM
    Beautiful write John...luv shannon

  1. Date: 11/22/2011 8:38:00 PM
    A nice way to remind us of the importance of that bright new star placed just for Jesus! How are you, john?