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Stop, Look and See

It just takes a moment just stop see what you see what do you hear and smell here I am living breathing as me At times don't feel I really belong in this world I belong to another seeing this crazy world in it's state a loner I've been having no brother My eyes see a beautiful creation marred by selfishness and pride mankind thinks it just happened such foolishness one has to deride One's nose smells shorter days as the world worsens to the end the maker will draw His curtain final judgement He'll then send

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Date: 2/18/2016 9:18:00 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 2/18/2016 9:21:00 AM
thanks Funom, glad you liked it, blessings, Gordon
Date: 2/14/2016 12:47:00 PM
so true! well penned! ( looking forward to the fulfillment of 2Peter 3:13)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 2/14/2016 1:46:00 PM
Sorry Susan that message before went too early, yes we wait in anticipation for the great day of our full redemption. God bless, Gordon
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 2/14/2016 1:44:00 PM
Thanks Susan,

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