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Stolen By the Moon -- Andaree

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Twilight on the ocean was as blue as steel. Caressed by the sun, one touch would feel a soft trace of liquid gold. With a storm foretold, the wind grows cold. The moon rose, to watch waves unfold, over the sea, uncontrolled. Lightning appears, but the moon reveals golden glints of jewel tones as the thunder peals
___________________________________________________ 10/13/15 Submitted for Andrea's Contest: "Andaree Contest #II"

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Date: 10/21/2015 9:38:00 PM
Carrie, Wonderful win.................. SKAT
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Date: 10/18/2015 4:57:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Carrie. Wished I had read this sooner too. Still love your exquisite W9imagery. Congrats! Sandra
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Date: 10/18/2015 3:11:00 PM
Oh Carrie I wish I'd read this before the contest closed it is so beautiful and would have placed very highly:-( hugs jan xx
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Carrie Richards
Date: 10/18/2015 3:16:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. My own fault for not going back and re-checking the form !! Not the first boo-boo I've made !! LOL !!
Date: 10/17/2015 9:17:00 PM
Oh my. I wish someone had told you the first and last lines were not the same. This is so beautiful, carrie. sorry it's only HM
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Date: 10/18/2015 9:46:00 AM
Akkkk!! Somehow I forgot about that requirement!! Oh Boo on me !! LOL !! Not the first time I messed up !!! :(
Date: 10/13/2015 2:14:00 PM
Very nice, Carrie! If I was judging the contest this would be, at the very least, a front runner! My best regards! :) john P.s A Seven!
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