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If I were that girl in the photograph They glared, they stared you had to be there A room filled with eyes Was not a surprise Talk of the town but look how time flies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/28/2015 4:25:00 PM
this is an interesting poem. It almost reads like a limerick! Love your title for it!
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Date: 4/28/2015 4:24:00 PM
hey, thanks so much for the nice wins for everybody. I've been getting such low scores this week, It really made my day!
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Date: 4/28/2015 3:12:00 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara
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