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I still think of you In my lonly time Wish that I could be with you Besides in my mind The precious thing you've given me In so many small pieces The revelations that let me know That my love still increases My mind plays pictures Of when you were alive I remember all the details The good and bad times And always comes the tears That fall from my eyes Every tear a gift for you The one love of my life Sometimes I pick up my pen And I write you a letter I try to make the words sweet Because poetry is much better I know that you are living Some where outside of time I hope that I am with you Reading you this rhyme How ever it is that angels love I hope to love you that way For you have been the only true love I've ever had unto this day I pray to God with all my might That He made me for you Because you were the only one Who's love I found was true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/22/2012 4:49:00 AM
This is absolutely lovely..Juniper
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Date: 10/19/2012 8:02:00 AM
Thanking you today for your comments on my writing John III. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX
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Date: 10/1/2012 7:39:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your inner feelings that express so much truth in this space - your poem is lovely - Shaz :)
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Date: 9/5/2012 6:53:00 PM
This poem comes from the heart. Nicely done. love phyl
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Date: 8/22/2012 9:55:00 PM
John Loving III, this is an heartfelt write...an honest declaration of true love...well written and well expressed...she must have been extra special. Thanks for your visit and comments. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 8/22/2012 6:01:00 PM
sad and heartfelt..nice ..thnx for visit! Jag
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Date: 8/22/2012 2:41:00 PM
John, this is utterly moving....your heart was definately broken. I enjoyed this write of yours immensely! ps....sweet vidalia says hi! gwendolen
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Date: 8/20/2012 8:27:00 AM
John, i can say again that you are John the beloved. This is more heart written than hand written. Good job.
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Date: 8/17/2012 4:46:00 PM
gracious lines of memories John so moving with emotion luv.. a treasured write .. am trying to feel better .. hard right now.. too many ailments luv..
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Date: 8/16/2012 11:29:00 AM
True love....beautiful written John - tears from heart - well done. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/16/2012 4:53:00 AM
I've replied to the other soup mail you sent me, don't know if you've seen it yet, but there's a kiss waiting to be claimed...
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Date: 8/12/2012 4:50:00 AM
nice to see you're inspired again :-) darling, this is so beautiful and moving that it could have been dictated by angels...I don't think you will ever get over her, and this poem bears testimony to that...(replied to your soup mail)
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Date: 8/11/2012 1:28:00 PM
So sweet ....Enjoyed reading your passionate work in honor and memory of April..Thanks for stopping by..Yes, a park ranger in the making..Sara
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