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contest's poem I watch the splendor of a shooting star and breathe the beauty of a hum-guitar her light in flight is like a million lanterns on a cooling night I dream awhile beneath the tarp of heaven then close my eyes & slowly count to seven I wish in true for souls renew and soon I'm covered in night's dew I loose the mind and pry his realm it's an expedience of God's mystic dream when free I see the beauty of his creation for all eternity I watch the splendor of a bird in flight and breathe the beauty of a blessed night his wings they sing to me of freedom, and all a night can bring If only we can learn to sing like a Cardinal on a string response poem To see creation from afar its subtle tails from flaming star its burning flight sky so bright disappears in brilliant white A wistful dream beneath round sky with deeper breathe from endless sigh truth it tends soul it mends night engulfs, dreams it sends Reasons sought for life that's sown beautiful soul you've never owned understand without demand creation's born from spiritual hand To see the splendor of Angel's wings sacred night that always sings to free your soul from its earthly belt like a night birds song your heart has felt contest Answer Me

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:46:00 AM
Frederic, Congrats on your win in Mystic's contest. *LINDA*
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Date: 4/25/2016 6:33:00 AM
A fine piece indeed.... Congrats Frederick, for your placement in the contest!!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/22/2016 5:00:00 AM
Wonderful poetry n win Frederic .. big congrats
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Date: 4/12/2016 4:07:00 PM
I like how the pattern seemed to match up really well to hers. Great imagery in your poetry here. a delight to read.
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Date: 4/12/2016 2:48:00 PM
what a superb response with such languid artword, frederick...a pleasure to read yuo today..huggs
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