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Stars, and the moon Stars, like the birth signs Stars, telling your fortune Stars, people of our times Stars, have you got it right Stars, for good behaviour Stars, there sparkling so light Stars, studied by an astronomer Stars, there's a distant galaxy Stars, orbit the atmosphere Stars, there is too so many Stars, at night they apear Stars, I once saw in your eyes Stars, where have they gone Stars, those in the night skies Stars, look it's a shooting one This spare of moment idea I wrote a year ago still been wondering wheather to put on here wanted ito addd to it but s=not sure where to go with it when I was writing elements of life and mother earth i dont know much about astrology,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, wanted to add more to this LOOKING FOR LAST VERSE TO FINISH HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! still couple verses lines not happy with just litle insight on subject MAYBE SOMEONE COULD HELP INSPIERD B SOUP POETS AT TIME JAN FEB 2012............................ WRITTEN BY MYSELF DAVIDCOTT ,,,,,, 2012>>>>> written jan 2012

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Date: 4/25/2014 5:01:00 PM
As my sister says, it is mesmerizing. You captured the imagination here...the stars were greatly described and I loved every single line. Thanks for posting this and nice 1st poem to begin with. -DWB
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Date: 9/3/2013 10:33:00 AM
Hi David... sending soup mail... enjoyed this one again... I love shooting stars.. Linda
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David Scott
Date: 9/3/2013 10:39:00 AM
Thanks mate trying to capture that feeling here my meaning of stars xxx
Date: 7/26/2013 3:53:00 PM
This is dreamy and even has a tint of longing. Stars are so mesmerizing. Love how you implemented it into words. Always, Laura
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Date: 9/3/2013 10:41:00 AM
thgank you for coment mate did not know where to go with this at first trying to capture a moment dxx
Date: 6/18/2013 1:58:00 PM
Hello David, i like the up date on your poem... Stars, in your eyes,,,,,,,,,,,, or...... Stars, that light up the sky..... Stars, in the night........... LOL, giving it a shot.... thank you for the comment... xox~ Linda
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Date: 6/14/2013 5:38:00 PM
Make a wish and it comes true.That s what shooting stars mean to me-beautiful post Scott
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Date: 6/13/2013 7:24:00 PM
oh wow David, this poem is very lovely, i love the stars, and i love your poem.... they hang very well in every line here.. Always ~ LINDA
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Date: 6/13/2013 12:01:00 PM
I don't think you need to add anything to it, my dear! It is beautiful the way it is! I love stars....My dad is good at astronomy. Don't believe in astrology myself, but I do love looking at the constellations at night! Love write!
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