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Star Gazing.

Went in to the garden tonight, a million stars, twinkling on high. Thoughts a long way from home. My mind began to roam. The brightest two stars, they were us. sealing our love. Many miles away, guiding the way. There I was all alone, sitting on my own. The person I needed next to me, was like, the thoughts in my mind, along way from home, and like the stars, out of reach.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/23/2008 4:53:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. I think many will relate to times like this. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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