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Star gazing.

  Went in to the garden tonight,
  a million stars,
  twinkling on high.
  Thoughts a long way from home.
  My mind began to roam.
  The brightest two stars,
  they were us.
  sealing our love.
  Many miles away,
  guiding the way.
  There I was all alone,
   sitting on my own.
  The person I needed
  next to me, was like,
  the thoughts in my mind,
  along way from home, 
  and like the stars,
  out of reach.

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  1. Date: 7/23/2008 4:53:00 PM
    The emotion comes through your words in this poem. I think many will relate to times like this. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen