Spring Time

Springtime Magnolias blooms Tiny pears grow 'pon tree Blueberries ripen on the bush Taste treat

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Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 5/31/2013 12:59:00 PM

I can imagine everything you wrote so vividly!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2013 12:56:00 PM

i like the tasty treat Sara.... almost like trick or treating without the mask... A very beautiful poem, lovely Magnolias... and sweet berries... xox~ Linda

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/27/2013 12:36:00 PM

you fill this page with such graceful lines, more radiant than spring, sara.. i like this... superb wprk!..:) huggs

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 5/27/2013 11:07:00 AM

Natures marvelous creation you have wrapped up in 5 lines. beautiful!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/27/2013 9:21:00 AM

The mantel of spring embroidered by your poetic writing! Superb! Thank you!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/27/2013 7:17:00 AM

Ah, spring. A lovely poem. BG

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/27/2013 6:31:00 AM

This is a fantastic write, another awesome Cinquain by you my friend! You have delighted me by your incredible splendor that you have painted with this glorious poem Sara! What a tremendous piece, such a glorious poem, Great Work!!