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07.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Spring Sonata Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jcb Brul

3rd place in the contest

Muted spring tunes, in blush Glides softly on the strings between the seasons Nickel-plated steel springs become soft A lush, colorful atmosphere whirls around your head Feminine details are being unpacked channeling eternal muses Freshly labels, touring relentlessly With impressive powers, snowdrops break through the snow Spring is obviously ready and ambitious Musics universe is infinite the listener is free to interpret Play orchestra, play

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Regina Elliott

Date: 3/29/2024 5:38:00 PM

How beauteous an emerging spring poem. A very worthy contest entry. My very best wishes for the contest. Have a blessed Easter. ~

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/16/2024 1:47:00 AM

Simply stunning. To create a symphony from snowdrops, is breathtaking. Love this .

Jay Narain

Date: 3/8/2024 10:49:00 AM

Nice picture from Nordic kingdoms. Poem captures the theme of spring with happy spirit.

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/8/2024 8:00:00 AM

" Nickel-plated steel springs become soft A lush, colorful atmosphere whirls around your head Feminine details are being unpacked channeling eternal muses" -- Magnificent poetry. I can see your love for music, in particular you knowledge of strings. The heart like strings...love like strings...with fond time and dear play will be stretched tunefully into infinity. Love your poem. A Strong FAV!

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/8/2024 6:39:00 AM

The captivating picture beautifully captures the essence of your spring poem, Anne-Lise, emanating a vibrant and enthusiastic spirit. I concur that spring appears to be eagerly prepared and filled with aspirations.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/8/2024 6:00:00 AM

So nice. I love that. Play orchestra, play! Hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/8/2024 5:59:00 AM

Awesome photo--much enjoyed your spring poem, exuding exuberance, Anne-Lise.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/8/2024 5:41:00 AM

Anne-Lise, I usually don’t get excited about formatting, but what you did here enhances the joy felt while reading. Really cool!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2024 2:58:00 AM

Those snowdrops like crocus amaze me. I guess they do their best in colder climates than here though. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2024 6:03:00 PM

Love how you brought up feminine details.Sprng is a lovely goddess after all.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/7/2024 4:25:00 PM

exquisite free verse, Anne-Lise. I loved "a lush, colorful atmosphere whirls around your head." I loved that image and its accurate as to what's unfolding here in Texas. I agree, spring is obviously ready and ambitious. Well said. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 3/7/2024 1:39:00 PM

Lovely poem! Hugs ~AA