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Spring Cleaning Ps

What are you stewing?
Please take out your trash before
it takes over you.

familysenryu

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/22/2012 4:55:00 PM

Su,, , enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD

Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/24/2010 6:06:00 PM

like this my friend

Robb A. Kopp

Date: 11/18/2010 12:22:00 PM

vry good advice sue...Nice write

Brian Strand

Date: 7/2/2010 12:27:00 AM

We have been doing that as well this Summer. Sue.Difficult for some of us with a 40's upbringing.Rgds Brian

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 7/1/2010 9:27:00 PM

freaking brilliant... you speak to me Sister. x

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/28/2010 8:23:00 AM

A lot of truth in your Senryu Sue. Thank you for your kind comments. I did know about the spelling mistake but did not have time to correct it. Thought I could get back to it but didn't. Appreciate pointing it out as I hate spelling mistakes also. God Bless Phyl

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/28/2010 2:34:00 AM

great Senryu, excellent Harry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/27/2010 8:03:00 PM

LOL,, the smell of spring cleaning,, not so good all the time. Well i guess I got to get myself Summer cleaning soon. Enjoyed your poem once again Mrs. Sue,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/27/2010 7:21:00 PM

A nice senryu nicely worded

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/27/2010 2:30:00 PM

Dear Sue....you have more than enough time to write your verse "The Teachers" I will add your name PROUDLY!

Date: 6/27/2010 1:35:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. So much truth to your words. Thank you for sharing your humor with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 6/27/2010 1:14:00 PM

You said: " Curious about the first word in the second line ." - Fins of imagination - I meant underwater "wings" of imagination (like a fish... or mermaid...) It must be the closeness to the Pacific :) Great Senryu here, dear Sue. Just yesterday I "took out some trash" and blocked it :) Love, Iolanda

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