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Spit-Up

My shirt is splotched with spit-up, Though my shoulder sports a burper. My clothes are like a kingdom And my grandson's the usurper. He drinks his bottle, gives a burp And then, without a doubt, A quarter of what just went in Comes, like a fountain, out. I really do not mind, but learned My lesson, truth be told - When I'm with Henry, what I wear Is faded, frayed or old!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/1/2014 9:19:00 AM
You neglected to mention the sweet sour perfume. Lovely. Never wear a velvet dress on this mission. love you, Kathy
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/1/2014 9:51:00 AM
thanks, kathy! you're right - that smell is certainly part of the experience. i appreciate your comments...
Date: 1/31/2014 5:44:00 AM
This I like! I love how you've portrayed the image of the kingdom even with the burper - the child rules, the protective detail is rendered useless. Very well penned!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/1/2014 9:50:00 AM
thank you, vicky! much appreciated!
Date: 1/30/2014 11:19:00 PM
henry heaver the achiever with the ins and outs. loves to drink all that he can until his belly spouts. :)
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/1/2014 9:49:00 AM
this comment cracked me up, robert! thank you for it!
Date: 1/30/2014 10:57:00 PM
You are a wonder, Ilene. Always being inspired by so many things and the grandkiddies too!!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/1/2014 9:49:00 AM
thank you, andrea! i always like to write about things i'm experiencing or reading about. there's a neverending list of things to inspire...
Date: 1/30/2014 9:54:00 PM
Once again, nicely written, Ilene. Your grandson Henry still sounds like a sweetheart.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/1/2014 9:48:00 AM
thanks, robert! yes, he's a delight, despite his spitting up all over me!
Date: 1/30/2014 9:29:00 PM
I haven't been on the soup for sometime but stopped by and found this wonderful new poem of yours. Love it. I especially love the second stanza. How you put it together is awesome. The last line! Marvelous! I am so far behind on reading your poems. I really must try to catch up.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/1/2014 9:47:00 AM
it's always wonderful to know that you're reading my poems. i so appreciate your supportive comments, jon!

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