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Spit and the Ocean

Spit and the Ocean The sand spits at me as I walk an uninvited interloper content in my inane belief I leave disappearing footprints. Theft, pilferage, armed robbery, committed in covetous collusion, sunrises seared into memory, plagiarized in dreams. Thundering timpani of surf rolling rounded stones, salty chime of windblown sand peppering the sea wall, distant fog horn tuba - ushers in the dimly lit aisles following history’s lights through shifting shoals. The air shrieks, the ocean growls, the sand burns, the brine stings, the surf - in foaming rage - erases all sign of my presence, spitting as I walk away. 1/29/2016

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Date: 3/7/2016 12:14:00 PM
Nice win...Linda
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Date: 1/31/2016 8:34:00 PM
wow, what a great way to do the contest. outstanding imagery and different from what most will do. I bet this makes the list.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/11/2016 8:16:00 PM
Well Andrea it didn't make the list, but then again others wonder why some of their poems don't make my lists, C'est la vie. Always appreciate your interest and input.

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