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Spirit Mountain

Serene Mountain’s so inviting
With clad stone cold faces peeking
Blue mirror pools so exciting 
Quivering patches touch my skin 
Leaning against a moaning wind 
Rapped in a rapture of heavens grin 

Inspired by John freeman’s “A Nature Verse contest” 

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  1. Date: 8/8/2013 6:13:00 PM
    Very nice depiction of a serene place. "leaning against a moaning wind"....a line that gives the poem expressive character. :)

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 7:07:00 AM
    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Laura. Love and blessings, Carol

  1. Date: 9/21/2011 2:13:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the contest of Moses "A Nature Verse" Laura. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/19/2011 12:20:00 PM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Laura

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 10:40:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Laura. Nice going. xxxRalph

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 3:54:00 PM
    Laura, beautiful piece, Serene is the word. thanks for taking the time to offer your memorable verse, the honor was mine in reading this worthy Second place entry. Agape, Moses.

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 3:11:00 PM
    Very nice write Laura. Congratulations on placing 2nd. Well done

  1. Date: 9/18/2011 1:50:00 PM

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 2:31:00 PM
    Smile, *^_^* “This Is Absolutely Beautiful As Is The Image It Paints of Yourself My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Laura! *^_^* The Lovely Rhyme Flowed As A Perfect Mountain's River Bringing Splendours of Serenity Unto Ones Own Spirit *^_^* And for Some Reason I Could Envision Your Beauty Standing Aneath Crystal Blue Waterfall *^_^* Very Lovely &, Thank You, for Blessing Myself With Your Precious Visit, My Dear!” *^_^* Two Faves & My Love Unto Your Pretty Light, Always & Forever, Jasper *

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 1:46:00 PM
    Sensational Laura. The best to you in Moses' contest. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 9:58:00 AM
    Wonderful Laura!But John wants only 6 lines.Visit his contest page.....regards.

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 9:57:00 AM
    Laura the view you have depicted is breath taking. Good luck in the contest. Love, Vie

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 4:19:00 AM
    beautiful.....nice are really giving me a your work

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 1:30:00 AM
    a majestic write Laura my friend.. a stunning piece of creative poetry from the gorgeous photo.. every lines expressive and poignant .. lovely visuals..good luck in this contest luv..

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 11:07:00 PM
    wow, you sure nailed this contest. What a gem, laura. Sure to do well!

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 10:18:00 PM
    A lovely verse that has a native Indian feel to it. I could imagine them in this environment and love the images you paint with words.