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Spin of Time

The season is here On this typical Maiden morn Of week days It’s by this hour Though slightly late I rose to take my bath The ointment was done and gone What’s more was to Nestle on the well placed Soft sofa by the corner Of my reading room And to await my breakfast To be served. Well has been done to the belly What’s needed (from me) was After settling on the round To dress up and find my way To the lecture room Alas an indignation Though a natural inclination That crept into the scene When I was about stepping Out of the room Here I picked up the cast Of the rolling sound Escorted by the heavy gale At the fore Of my chamber door The cloud I glimpsed Beckoned on these Natural commotions The rumbled Of this morn thunderstorm Took me by surprise As I felt the tremble of my abode As though the roof and the wall would cave in How heavy this morning rush would be? Certainly it’s heavy and took charge closely Three hours of the entire day Blessing showery hours Wasn’t it? That would best be related In the meantime By the soaking swamp The well wet weed The saturated sea pool And the colorful field Of bloom cherries and roses Posted on 23/04/2013

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Date: 7/1/2013 9:58:00 PM
this is a nice winning poem in PD's contest. <3 SKAT <3
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Date: 6/28/2013 2:40:00 PM
Congratulations o. Your outstanding win. Well deserved. Connie
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Date: 6/26/2013 4:48:00 PM
Hello my friend Abdulhafeez , CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for enjoying my contest...I had much fun in closing my contest... "A weeks into my poem.... contest." Take care and enjoy my blog if you want... have yourself a lovely day.... LINDA
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Date: 6/26/2013 3:46:00 PM
congrats on a well deserved win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/25/2013 10:03:00 AM
You Inspire...:):):)Loved t....Adarsh
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Date: 6/24/2013 5:36:00 PM
An exquisite piece! Your language is unique and unforgettable. I especially like your final five lines. Brilliant, Abdulhafeez!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 6/24/2013 3:52:00 PM
I felt I was visiting a strange land! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/24/2013 7:56:00 AM
A wonderful write AO. Loved the imagery in it, flowed well. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 6/24/2013 6:39:00 AM
nicely penned AO.....I like the end result of cherry and rose blooms...thanks for stopping by
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Date: 6/24/2013 6:36:00 AM
This piece reminds me of my frien Yanny's work which I am very fond of. Very intresting use of language and imagery.
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