Spiders- Butterfly

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They are arachnid have two body parts and eight legs some have venom some kill humans but most catch insects in a web of silk Change little but size spiders build webs folks fears them they are many and some are well known most black widows kill male when mating Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2009 10.19.2014

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/21/2014 7:17:00 PM

really crafted very beautifully dorian excellent pen

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:23:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Liam, for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Terry O'Leary

Date: 10/21/2014 5:50:00 AM

Nice write! (Nowadays I am more fearful of the spyders)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:24:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Terry, for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/20/2014 7:46:00 PM

D, I hate Spiders (or as they say in the German: "Die Spinnen), but I love your write. The picture you posted above says it all . . . worth a thousand words at least. Great Job!! Another "7" in spite of the Spider dangling above. Cheers and Spill Ink!! Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:25:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Gary, for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D