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Spare Me If You Can

Pinch an inch, then steal a mile Park my Heart in all that's vile And then I start to fall apart (For just a little while) Why at my peak I feel so weak; Feel I'm tossed in to the street? Nothing soothes all this rue- (Makes me want to want to weep!)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/19/2013 10:28:00 AM
nice little poem, full of emotion and imagery. Makes the reader think and feel the sadness. Good job.
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Date: 9/19/2013 10:37:00 AM
Thanks, Robin; that's what I was aiming for. Glad you enjoyed :)

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