Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

Spare Me if You Can

Just That Archaic Poet Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Spare Me if You Can which was written by poet Just That Archaic Poet. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Just That Archaic Poet

Best Just That Archaic Poet Poems

+ Fav Poet

Spare Me if You Can

Pinch an inch, then steal a mile
Park my Heart in all that's vile
And then I start to fall apart
(For just a little while)
Why at my peak I feel so weak;
Feel I'm tossed in to the street?
Nothing soothes all this rue-
(Makes me want to want to weep!)

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 10:28:00 AM
    nice little poem, full of emotion and imagery. Makes the reader think and feel the sadness. Good job.

    That Archaic Poet Avatar Just That Archaic Poet
    Date: 9/19/2013 10:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Robin; that's what I was aiming for. Glad you enjoyed :)