Spaces-Following the Sun

a combine harvests the field mice head west

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Donna Golden

Date: 5/12/2009 10:18:00 PM

Such are the days of mice...and men. :o) I see swaying fields of golden grain, and can hear the frantic twittering of the frightened little mice. You've created a broad picture with so few words...well done! <3 Donna

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/12/2009 10:18:00 AM

Awesome. what a visual. this reminds me of, 'of mice and men' awesome, Brian. love, Kristin

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/12/2009 5:22:00 AM

You are so excellent indeed! Must agree with Christopher! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/12/2009 4:55:00 AM

This is brilliant..firstly, the title rocks...then the message told in two lines..brother Brian I need your restraint...well done.