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Spaces- Snuffed Out

Bad light stops play The muscians retire Note: Haydn's Farewell Symphony

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/4/2008 4:07:00 PM
very nice Brian, I always learn from you. :) Love, Kristin
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Date: 12/4/2008 12:21:00 PM
Ah, I remember this well from another posting of yours. Great use of this form. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/4/2008 9:18:00 AM
Well done , Maestro ..... Very clever piece ....
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Date: 12/4/2008 8:04:00 AM
This was an interesting story, if I recall...snuffing out their candles, so that they could leave, and put an ending to the symphony at last. I'm enjoying reading your "spaces"! Nicely done...Carrie
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