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Space Race

We whoosh around in outer space Much faster than the speed of light; As none can see our spaceships’ race, You say you’ve won and start a fight… For Susan’s Space contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/22/2013 8:15:00 PM
lol Jack, fun poem about space travel, and the likelihood of fights
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Date: 2/24/2013 8:13:00 PM
I love this cute little written piece Jack. I love space and learning about this wide expanse. Hope all is well with you. Had a weekend with both the grandsons so that always makes me happy. love phyl
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Date: 2/24/2013 12:51:00 AM
a cute little entry for SPACE!! This one has me really stuck , I keep getting an idea but can't go forward with it!
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Date: 2/23/2013 7:08:00 PM
Did you win this race my friend, through space and infinity? I loved how you approached this incredible poem! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this evening, you have inspired me to continue writing my novel that I have started, a space story, aliens and everything! Anyway, this is another one of your masterpieces Jack, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/23/2013 3:58:00 PM
Winning material for sure..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visits..I don't think that space would be a great place to be fighting but then there is Star Wars..Ha!!..Sara
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Date: 2/23/2013 3:31:00 PM
Hmm..Jack this was worth a thought, and to the page, was indeed the read well brought.."
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Date: 2/23/2013 3:26:00 PM
Can't help but smile with this one!! Isn't it the truth!??
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Date: 2/23/2013 1:02:00 PM
LOL! Brilliant little Rhyme, Jack. I love the third line. Really good to see you here today, my friend. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/23/2013 12:56:00 PM
- Yes, it's true Jack. - Good luck in the contest. - Wishing you a wonderful weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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