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In a little state of shock 
so many things left to pack;
She tries not to watch the clock
or gaze up at the stars tracks;

Overcome with emotion,
what an opportunity!
She made the right decision 
to be a piece of history; 

It's the beginning, this trip
rebuilding the human race;
Just a one way rocket ship, 
this chance to colonize Space

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  1. Date: 3/6/2013 11:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 1:31:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Melani xx

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:42:00 AM
    Melani, congratulations with your wonderful space-going poem in Susan's contest...xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 7:21:00 PM
    Original thought and enjoyable poetry Melani, good luck in the space contest and thank you for your kind visit, xxx