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Soon - Goodbye To Summer

Soon Icy drops of dew like diamonds Crunch beneath summer-sandaled toes. Trembling trees release their tired jewels To risk breezes off northern snows. Topaz, garnet and citrine leaves Spiral from moonstone blue skies above Emeralds lose their hot weather hues, Sparrows cuddle, asleep is the dove

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Date: 4/30/2017 1:54:00 PM
The brilliant juxtapositions! This poem is decked with diamonds! Wow, just wow!
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Date: 9/14/2016 7:39:00 AM
Imagery dances to the rhythm of change! Beautiful! 7 You shine, Sunlite My best, chuck
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Date: 9/12/2016 9:09:00 PM
This is so beautiful you can tell you really put some thought into it.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/13/2016 11:23:00 AM
Thank you, Mike.
Date: 9/12/2016 8:57:00 PM
I love your coming autumn gemstones. This is lovely Sunlite. ; ) 7
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/13/2016 11:24:00 AM
I really appreciate your comment and that 7, too. Love,
Date: 9/11/2016 3:08:00 PM
It is a beautiful poem, Sunlite. Full of vivid images and your bright imagination:)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/12/2016 6:34:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel. You are truly kind.
Date: 9/11/2016 1:40:00 PM
A gem of a poem Sunlite auch incredible imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/12/2016 6:35:00 PM
Thank you very, very much, Jan.

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