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Sonnet 1 - Sea Trout

Fast river on my thighs, an act of god. The soft silvery arc of the sun caught line, the swish and the wish of the long fly rod, the singing of the line and the reels whine and whipping back, line stripped off and out. Line tightening strike! Straight as an arrow from the bow of the rod to the Sea Trout The fisher fights footing in the shallows. And yet, as he struggles to win the match the fish fights for life. Where does my heart lie? Splash, sudden slack. Freedom! No more the catch. Coffee cool in my tight right hand, I sigh. And an untouched sandwich in my left hand with fresh cucumber and salmon, canned.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/15/2014 6:15:00 AM
Paddi, I don't think I asked you. I would like to include your poem in my text book along with the other sonnets.
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Date: 3/7/2014 9:07:00 PM
Nicely penned sonnet and congrats on the win,
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Date: 2/4/2014 11:41:00 AM
Woah interesting! Fishing while munching salmon sanwiches. Nice fishing trip imagery depicted. Hugggs.
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Date: 1/7/2014 4:15:00 AM
Enjoye3d the write on fishing on the river, Paddi
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