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Soft Lavender Promise

Christening the weeping willow upon the misty morning dawn The daring sun fighting the muted cloud covered haze in victory Spills a tapestry of golden light through the stained glass window of hope Waking from an evening of steamy passion and endless love songs I lie tangled in your arms in soft breaths of honest confession As we gaze beyond the garden of soft lavender promise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/3/2018 12:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win! :)
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Date: 8/2/2018 9:08:00 AM
Wow - what awesome imagery you paint. A well deserved gold medal, my friend.
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Date: 2/26/2017 6:47:00 AM
Beautiful writing Rick, check for typos I found 2 or 3, would have placed higher otherwise.
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Rick Parise
Date: 2/26/2017 10:49:00 AM
Crazy.......Thanks-
Date: 2/25/2017 12:34:00 AM
Thoughtfully and creatively penned ... unusually intimate and joyful. Congrats, my friend! :)
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Date: 12/17/2016 7:15:00 PM
Very beautiful, Rick. Congratulations. ...Fran
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Date: 12/16/2016 8:28:00 PM
A 7 for this lovely, WINNING poem, Rick. Your metaphors are sweet! Janice
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Date: 12/12/2016 2:41:00 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful, Rick! This one goes to my list of favorites. Elaine
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