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So Long to Winter

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So Long to Winter

You drop  slowly to the ground
Silently, not making a sound
You gather layer upon layer of dust
Playing with you is a must.

You get colder the more I watch
You melt at my very touch
Coming to see me in winter season
Without any rhyme or reason.

I can only play with you so long
Until your season is done
I must wait for a season new
then bid you winter adieu.

Copyright © Phyllis Babcock

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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:30:00 PM
    very well done indeed Phyllis,,,, I wish you a Happy Valentine's Day ;}

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 9:07:00 PM
    Phyllis , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:19:00 AM
    Brrr, makes me cold Phyl, but I know it's written with a warm heart and that warms me xx

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 9:40:00 AM
    Ah Phyl, how I wish it were true, despite the hope you express, it hangs in front of me like an enduring chill. Now write me one to get me through it! :) Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 10:48:00 AM
    EXCELLENT POETRY!!! So well written and formed. Wow. My fav of the day!! Hugs n more Michael

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 4:37:00 PM
    this is really neat, Phyllis. playing with winter. Not me. hahaha. I really enjoyed this and thanks for your comments. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 12:07:00 PM
    Hi Phyillis I love the snow, you sum up winter and snow beautifully, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:23:00 AM
    Canadians love winter.

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 4:07:00 PM
    Hello Phyllis, I'm sure many praise your title... "so long to winter".... love the poem..PD

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 12:31:00 PM
    A truly lovely poem Phyllis, I love it - Wishing you a lovely weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 12:16:00 PM
    A true pleasure to read your rhyme,Phyllis.Wish I could say so long to winter and welcome spring already:) Have a peaceful and blessed weekend~Arild