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So Brief the Time

The lilacs have come and gone, so brief was their time, fragile flowers like some, who seldom linger long, their purple prominence a pantomime of our springtime. Full heart-shaped clusters pump perfume so sublime a gift from heaven, mother nature can't prolong, the lilac has come and gone, so brief was their time. Harvest home to birthing butterflies in sunny climes brought low by the battering rain of May’s swan song, their purple prominence a pantomime of our springtime. Unmated, virginal, a merry gift, most sacred in its prime a rust red blight upon the cloth, a crown of thorns once gone, the lilacs have come and gone so brief was their time. Let shoots reform and hollowed make a flute to pass time to cheer our mother merry and sooth the wearied throng, their purple prominence a pantomime of our springtime Like they, we spring forth, summer, fall and wintertime may our seed justly arise in the beauty of heart song, The lilacs have come and gone so brief was their time, their purple prominence a pantomime of our springtime

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Date: 6/27/2011 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:35:00 AM
Glad to see your beautiful work placed high in the contest Debbie.Congrats to you dear... love, gautami
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Date: 6/24/2011 6:23:00 AM
I found such amazing images here hun. Many congrats for this win Debbie.
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Date: 6/23/2011 7:34:00 PM
Simply GORGEOUS, DEBS, Oh my gosh, one of your best lyrical writings I have seen to date!! Lucid, lyrical, and Lovely. What is not to love about this one. Awesome!!
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Date: 6/23/2011 3:05:00 PM
It must have been hard to judge these poems. We have been graced with some real beauties and yours right up there among them where it deserves to be! Congrats to you Debbie I really like the alliteration and how it rolls.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/23/2011 3:13:00 PM
thanks so much in this form you really need to pay attention to what you repeat ;)
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/23/2011 3:13:00 PM
thanks so much in this form you really need to pay attention to what you repeat ;)
Date: 6/23/2011 2:43:00 PM
Many congrats on your win, Debs : )
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Date: 6/23/2011 1:13:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of actie, Debbie
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Date: 6/23/2011 9:35:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your wonderful winning poem in the contest .. an excellent creative journey luv..
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Date: 6/23/2011 9:26:00 AM
Love the way your related the lilacs to human life, Deb. You're on a roll with wins today! Congratulations, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:18:00 AM
Ahhh...love this, like reading a poem from a book of classic and ancient poetry!! Congrats on your win, dear Deb!!!
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Date: 5/28/2011 3:12:00 AM
A breathtakingly beautiful villanelle on the lilacs. Best wishes for the contest Debbie, love, gautami
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Date: 5/23/2011 5:56:00 AM
A beautiful acknowledgement to Spring, are these lovely flowers. Great imagery comes forth from these "hollowed...flute"s. Tiny perfumed cornucopias of colour. Love this, Debbie!! Best wishes! Mikki
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Date: 5/22/2011 2:59:00 PM
Hey this help each other co-operation is WORKING [I made a rhyme pattern booboo and a nice poets caught it and TOLD me hey Deb, line x hint, hint!] ain't friendship grand!
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Date: 5/22/2011 2:32:00 PM
Hi Debbi Guzzi! Cool name....I haveno piggy tails...how adorable a thot tho. Thanks for the elevating comments on the 60's net poem...OH THE LILACS!! If you could just throw the last remnants of them into a bottle and tip the lid every once in a while to get a hint of their magical aroma....I went out with my camera the other day to capture a lilac bush across the street (in the morning sun) and they were way past bloom. Bummer. Love this poem tho.
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Date: 5/22/2011 9:45:00 AM
Love the subtle way you intertwine nature and life. Very well written and a gem to read and enjoy. xoxo
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Date: 5/21/2011 5:32:00 PM
nice bright visuals with the lovely lilacs representing other things throughout this piece Debbie.. enjoyed as a birthday treat luv..thankxx..
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Date: 5/21/2011 4:59:00 PM
very beautiful...sounds like it was written long ago...love it. BG
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Date: 5/21/2011 3:27:00 PM
This is divine, Deb,and I fully expect to see it at the top!! way to Pantoum.
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Date: 5/21/2011 3:06:00 PM
Very nice write Debbie! You surely put alot of vision, mood, and creativity bringing the villanelle form to light and life.
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Date: 5/21/2011 3:04:00 PM
A breath of beauty ..... simply wonderful, and lifts the heart to read line by line. (I miss my lilacs blooming...too brief their time!) I have two glorious bushes against the garden fence....they were wonderful this year!
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