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Snowball in Hell

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Snowball in Hell

I'm watching the downfall of the nation I served
Leadership bought by the middle East has me unnerved
Our flag waving in glory still makes this old heart swell
But our chance of survival is that of a snowball in hell
Our pride's been replaced by government subsidized laws
Free homes, free phones, free care, we no longer fight for a cause
Dependent on government we can no longer be called man
Just jackasses and sheep, no longer part of the plan
The end of an era with a system that's beginning to smell
Our chance of rebuilding is that of a snowball in hell
The state of the union has working Americans irate
Too many dreams have been shattered since 2008
Financially destroyed by a man on a mission, pray tell
Our chance of achieving is that of a snowball in hell

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  1. Date: 4/15/2013 6:17:00 PM

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 4:53:00 PM
    this sounds so much like Jamaica,great write Vince,what really is the intentions of those who govern us

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 7:46:00 AM
    Thankyou for kind comments on my poem and now that my strength is returning I will answer more comments, your poetry is a blessing to us all on the soup keepthe juices and pen flowing, God bless bob

  1. Date: 7/10/2012 2:45:00 PM
    I like you way of thinking Vince. I feel like you do and our government keeps taking and we keep giving. Makes you kinda depressed. soup mail. love phyl

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 9:10:00 PM
    Well said!