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Snow Dancing

Snow dancing across misty morning mood, winter laughs.

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Elizabeth Shannon

Date: 11/7/2009 4:38:00 AM

You've managed to make snow sound appealing!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/21/2009 4:16:00 PM

Love the way winter laughs while the snow is dancing. Hope old man winter has uttered his last laugh; I have friends who have been buried beneath piles of snow in New Hampshire for months. Love the poem, Darrell.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/21/2009 3:11:00 PM

This is awesome...the entire Haiku works well.

Judy Riley

Date: 3/21/2009 1:39:00 PM

Got to love the Haiku, wonderful short image. Winter is still laughting as we wait for Spring. Thanks for sharring.Judy Riley

Date: 3/21/2009 1:16:00 PM

Nice use of personification and imagery in this concise poem. Creative use of allitereation. Enjoyed it. Karen