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it was just white in my dream, in my sleep, in a pair of my closed eyes. then the cold ice falls in love with my eyes which never slept. i always find my eyelashes wet frost the dew on the grass, in the morning and evening. then the white color was also in love to my body. delightedly shower me, bathe my body. my body suddenly has a bathroom with a tub full of eternal white. and my memories swam in a huge plow. i do not know where will it go. you know, i always imagined snow coming your house, knocking on your door, a pair of your pinched cold eyes trying to look through the whit snow, watching me playing in the snow, alone. and you come along.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/13/2016 10:33:00 PM
JOEY, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/12/2016 10:06:00 AM
Joey, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 2/16/2012 11:21:00 AM
I am stopping back today to see if you have continued to write and post new poetry Joey. I hope that you will continue with your writing. You have taken the first step~ ~to write and share. When you feel the need for inspiration read some of the other poetry here at PoetrySoup. It will help you and I will stop by again to read your poems. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2012 5:48:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Joey. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2012 2:39:00 AM
Sweet and loving poem written Joey......romantick....(a bit cold with the snow,I dont like snow :) - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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