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Smokey - Faithful Friend To the End

sMOKEY - FAITHFUL FRIEND TO THE END As we grew older, Smokey and I, Our lives would change a bit. As a teen there was school and friends, In the kitchen he'd quietly sit. All alone he'd wait for me, To finally end my day, And come and spend some time with him, And maybe gently play, A little game of dangle the string, Or scratch behind his ears, I didn't know, how could I know, He neared the end of his years. At night I did my homework, At kitchen table with him. He lay across my books and watched, And rubbed my head with his chin. Then when I was just eighteen, I came home from a swimming date. He staggered 'cross the yard to me, I almost was too late. He laid him down right at my feet, I took him in my arms, He closed his eyes and then was gone, And with him all his charms, That he displayed throughout his years, My buddy, playmate, friend. He remained so all his life, Faithful to the end. Judy Ball (There will just never be another Smokey)

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Date: 7/5/2011 11:53:00 AM
Great Judy and thanks for the comment left on my poem Evil Speed Cameras. Robert C-D
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/5/2011 7:11:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/5/2011 6:52:00 AM
Judy. I'm a sucker for pets. Have had many and loved all. The end is never easy. Great poem here. BobQ
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/5/2011 7:12:00 PM
I agrre my friend. Thanks so much for stopping by and for the kind words. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/4/2011 6:32:00 PM
Oh Judy, I know how precious they are and your loving poems give deep insight into just how much you loved him. I loved each one of your Smokey poems.
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/4/2011 7:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Elizabeth. Glad you can relate. He was definitely one of a kind. King of the kitties. I feel he waits for me in Heaven. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/4/2011 2:58:00 PM
This was a beautiful tribute to a dear and loving friend. I know what you mean;some pets may be replaced, but it never the same. God bless you, Jancarl
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/4/2011 5:12:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend. I will never for get my first and best friend. He waits for me in Heaven as do all my faithful pets. Thanks for stopping by. God Blesss, JB
Date: 7/4/2011 2:57:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work about your pet..I can feel the attachment that you felt to your friend..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material..Sara
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/4/2011 5:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara. Glad you liked it. God Bless, JB
Date: 7/4/2011 2:35:00 PM
All parts of life are special Judy, and you and smokey shared that part of eternity you were mean't to, and thats what counts when you add it all up!
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Judy Ball
Date: 7/4/2011 5:14:00 PM
He was really the bomb Joe. Thanks so much. God Bless, JB

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