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Smile of An Angel - Senryu Contest

smile of an angel sending hearts into love mode... beware temptress.

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/27/2013 1:40:00 PM

take much from this inspiring write well done

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/29/2013 1:05:00 AM

Thank you Linda ...Seren

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/21/2013 10:13:00 AM

A remake of Adam & Eve, only the "apple" is more threatening. I dig this.

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/21/2013 2:38:00 PM

Hello Drake, thanks for stopping by ....Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/21/2013 6:51:00 AM

Would this be cupid that's doing all of this? A temptress could definitely be formed by cupid I believe...he's a clever and mischievous angel! Or is he an angel...hmmm, I don't know, maybe this senryu could be about a simple angel, or an arch-angel! The love created from one of these angels might not be what you desire, like you said...it could be just a temptress that would be formed! What a tremendous piece Seren, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/21/2013 2:39:00 PM

Hi Russell, glad you enjoyed it ...Seren