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Sleepwalk, Sweetheart

Dance the Blues Sweetheart, does our love need a fresh start? I'm longing for new music that grooves the best of the blues. Dancing, in the moonlight, romancing as you sway with me. The magic that proves we still got the moves. Jazz, real jazz, that lifts our tired, dried-up souls to remembrance with style. As we nestle together; two hearts with too much to gain, yet for a while. Motion, is not lost on the ocean of long years out of touch. Dance the blues, with nothing to lose. parody on Sleepwalk by Santo and Johnny with like rhythm and theme

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Date: 10/13/2016 8:16:00 AM
great lines here Reason! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/12/2016 10:12:00 PM
Perfect! Congrats.
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Date: 10/12/2016 9:18:00 PM
A great fit from the original to yours, very well done and congrats on your placement :)
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Date: 10/9/2016 6:08:00 AM
Very nice ... very enjoyable ...
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Date: 10/11/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thanks, Probir. Glad you enjoyed it.

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