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Sleeping Beauty---Once Upon a Time

Fairytale, it seems to be,……. is it a dream or is it real? With the break of dawn, I watch you sleep. Your smile is just a trace The sun peeks in.... and seems to keep a finger on your face I've caught you with your guard down, with dreams I cannot know I'm bound by love, as blinding as the morning's afterglow The new day holds a promise, with magic I can feel A fairytale, it seems to be, a dream or is it real? I see the jealous sun caress, though, you are mine, alone, to keep Tomorrow seems a distant place, too far to see from here Our yesterdays will fade somehow, like faces in the crowd But wrapped in warmth of midnight's arms, are moments that allow to keep me high up in the clouds, on a stairway to the sun Your sleeping face, reveals to me... that time and space stands still And what I feel, ........I know is real........may nothing break the spell This afterglow, of night's embrace, is something new to know I watch you sleep, as the sun peeks in, with warmer undertones.... Across the bed, the light grows bold, and turns the dawn to gold Tomorrow seems a distant place, too far to see from here, Our yesterdays are vanished stars, lost traces in the clouds But wrapped in warmth of midnight's arms, where moments are allowed to sleep and dream of you and me. I must not wake you now A fairytale, it seems to be,……. a dream or is it real? ______________________________________________________________ 2/2/16 For "Once Upon A Time" Contest Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Date: 2/7/2016 10:47:00 PM
I love your writes ! Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:23:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your wonderful "Once Upon A Time Win!!!" Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/6/2016 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Carrie, for your 'sleeping beauty' lovely rewrite. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:27:00 AM
a beauty indeed, carrie.. fine congrats on your high win!..huggs
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:08:00 AM
Very beautiful write Carrie:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/6/2016 10:56:00 AM
Carrie, thank you very much for being a part of my contest! Your poem was wonderful and intriguing..*smiles* -luloo :)
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Date: 2/3/2016 6:02:00 AM
Just beautiful, the emotions tender and familiar to anyone who has stared with love at a sleeping face. I love it ... CayCay
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Date: 2/3/2016 2:41:00 AM
Absolutely Beautiful, Carrie. Sure to top the winners list.
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Date: 2/3/2016 12:38:00 AM
AS ALWAYS, exceptional poetry from your golden pen. The six ending verses are pure gold . SUPERB POEM... A7
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