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Skyward

I hear song amid the distant tree line of winged angels singing praise in sunlight prisms that flicker and white orchids of flowering lace in conscious mind I retrace each moment of spirit great call of soft water line pulsing and visions that ebb my soul one moment I climb out beyond this entrapment of body and flesh and roll infinite in spirit with dust and ash of breath for now my hands tightly folded in a moment of praise and request of divine heights I see climbing to entwine eternities nest I drift in words held closely of misty hymns fluttering light a breath a sigh a great release one moment a fraction in time ______________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/22/2011 8:12:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 7/22/2011 5:53:00 AM
Congrats Rick on your third place win with this elegant beauty .. I did re enter your contest so hope u like luv..happy weekend with another great win...luv..
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Date: 7/22/2011 5:14:00 AM
Congratulations on the win with your wonderful poetry in P.D.'s contest *Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/1/2011 10:46:00 PM
Rick, I like the "orderliness" of your stream of consciousness. Beautiful one. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/29/2011 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win ^Rick in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2011 9:06:00 PM
Many warm congrats rick for this win.
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Date: 4/28/2011 7:11:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your HM in Debbie's contest luv.. a phenom write .. a super honor too..
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Date: 4/28/2011 11:22:00 AM
Many congrats ^Rick for big win in Debbies contest with imagination at its best. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:41:00 AM
Such a spiritually uplifting poem, Rick. Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/28/2011 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Rick
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Date: 4/28/2011 1:55:00 AM
mystified to the last drop, rick.. another congrats to you, big time! ..;) hugggs
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Date: 4/23/2011 3:59:00 PM
ntwine eternities nest.. oh I do luv that phrase Rick.. u have a beautiful way to emote exciting thoughts in your poetry ..Debbie will surely enjoy this entry .. reaches for the stars and grabs the moon too...luv.. good luck in the contest ..
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