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Situation Haiku

the tsunami struck with the entire world watching the judgement of God the radiation that they always knew was there silently rages it's time for prayer for the people over there humble one's self it's time for hero's knowing they will not live yet they bravely give the sacrifice's ordinary men will make will save their nation

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/28/2012 2:45:00 AM
Yes, cheer up! The human race has always overcome this kind of situation, with God's help; and now, The Situation is also giving the solution...:) Excellent write, Sir! Haikus are so difficult, as well as senryu, clerihew and all those wonderful masterpices of "one great idea in the fewest words ever!" With all my admiration, Hanitra
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Date: 1/9/2012 10:00:00 PM
i feel as if i was watching one of them sci-fic...movies.... hope is all we have...p.d.
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Date: 8/8/2011 8:36:00 PM
yet silently the monster awaits it's appointed time. jhl
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Date: 4/29/2011 12:25:00 AM
Snookie will be proud Sitch! ~JSLambert
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Date: 4/4/2011 9:08:00 AM
This is a nice tribute to the poor people of Japan who not only had the water, then snow and then radiation to contend with. My heart breaks when I see the destruction and we have to salute the heroes who give selflessly in the clean up of this tsunami. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/27/2011 8:50:00 AM
A great tribute to those ordinary/extraordinary people. They probably won't see themselves as heroes. They are loving and selfless. Wishing you the best, Situation! Mikki
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Date: 3/20/2011 1:08:00 PM
it's reality check, TS... a compssionate piece with vivid inferences... best of luck to you! ;) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/19/2011 7:43:00 AM
An eye-opener. It's great to observe the world and then turn these observations into verse. Always, Farah
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Date: 3/18/2011 8:32:00 AM
Good one for those wonderful heroes of Japan!
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Date: 3/18/2011 7:35:00 AM
Good one about the recent news...I hope that the worse is over but when it comes to what the earth could issue out we never know..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara
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Date: 3/18/2011 4:48:00 AM
Nice haiku on the situation of Japan,
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