Get Your Premium Membership

Sittingintheshade

nothing nothingtodo today so I am in my little citygarden sitting on the porch in the shade with my tea the garden full of rainbowgems and greenery old fat cat is stretched out snoring and little cat is on my feet purring she just finished killing- a blue flower it lay under her claw the air is still the wind chime is waiting and then a faint tinkle asoothingbreeze in the distance the hum of traffic so faint- it mingles with the silence a hummingbird zipped by but did not stop to say hello nothing nothingtodo but sit in the shade watching my garden grow __________________________ August 11, 2015 Poetry/Free Verse/sittinintheshade Copyright Protected, ID 15-698-921-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Don't Fight it .....Write it! Sponsor, John Lawless First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/19/2015 5:21:00 PM
Kudos on the win with this write...such deep thoughts in so simple wording.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/17/2015 3:35:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on the DON'T FIGHT IT.....WRITE IT!! contest... SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 8/15/2015 5:49:00 PM
such beautiful imagery - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 8/14/2015 3:46:00 PM
I felt like I was sitting in the chair myself, well done :), warm rdgs Laura
Login to Reply
Date: 8/14/2015 2:58:00 PM
Love the casual, matter of fact tone. Head to heart to page. Felt like I was sitting in a rocking chair beside you. Hot tea I'm guessing, down here we have sweetened ice tea, sometimes with lemon (I prefer peach tea).
Login to Reply
Date: 8/12/2015 11:16:00 AM
The luminous yet tranquil write dear poet! I can picture this splendidly...and i pray that your kitty makes good use of that "blue flower", I'd hate to hear that it went to waist..*smiles* have a wonderful day Constance, such the pleasure reading you today !...much love, james
Login to Reply
Date: 8/11/2015 9:09:00 AM
Wow!!! What a fabulous write, I am glad to read this, you penned this very beautiful and excellence.........A.M.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs