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Sisterly Examples

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Sisterly Examples

When I was young, I had a great disdain
for Campell's nasty soup named Alphabet.
One Saturday it was our mother's threat
we had to eat it up or home remain
and miss the matinee. How inhumane!
Mom left the room; I never will forget
the thing which I'd repeat without regret -
I took that slop and tossed it down the drain!

When Mom returned, I'd "downed" all of my soup.
Again she left; Mel went to dump HER meal
and at the sink got caught. Poor nincompoop!
She missed "Red Riding Hood" while I, the heel,
went out. Our mom was left "out of the loop."
My little sister did not even squeal!

(Some slang words here for my non-native friends:
a "nincompoop" is a foolish person,
"out of the loop" means to never be aware of something
and the last verb "squeal" means to "tell on someone"
I always tried to get away with murder when I was young
and I can't believe my sister missed the movie by not telling
on me! On the other hand, I really enjoyed "Red Riding Hood" heehee)

For Frank H's 
A Childhood MEMORY Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 4/27/2012 6:47:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Andrea...Love ..Joseph

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 11:18:00 AM
    Belated congratulations, Andrea! Lovely memories...poor little sister! : ) Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 1:05:00 AM
    My big congratulations to you, Andrea on your 3rd win with your humurous Italian Sonnet! It reminds me a lot of my mischievous sisters...just think: I was the only boy!!! I always admire your work...each poem you write is a gem. Thanks for sharing it with us. May you always have the inspiration to create more masterpieces. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs, Andrew.

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 4:55:00 PM
    Congrats Andrea on your winning poem enjoyed the read, great memories thanks for sharing with us luv vie

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 2:01:00 PM
    Andrea! Why you sneaky lil child!!! I'm tellin' on you! ha ha...You made me smile today when I desperately needed it! Love you silly vanilly! Congrats on this heartfelt write! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 1:55:00 PM
    So cute! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 9:47:00 AM
    ha! is this a true story? awesome that she didn't tell on you, that nincompoop! love that word! congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 9:42:00 PM
    Nice narration and beautiful piece. Congratulations on your win...

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 12:03:00 PM
    Busted..........NOT ~A sweet memory that brought a smile along with......CONGRATS my friend!!

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 10:59:00 AM
    Had me smiling on this act of sisterly love. ha ha. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 8:40:00 AM
    Oh....poor little sister, getting caught in the act!! (shoot....!! I would have been that little sister...my brother always got away with murder, and I was the one who sat in the penalty box!!)....Cute poem, Andrea! Congrats!

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 8:06:00 AM
    The word impish comes to mind Andrea. And you know, we are now what we were then. Congratulations

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 4/23/2012 11:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hahaha. yeah, I like acting impish sometimes!!!
  1. Date: 4/23/2012 7:57:00 AM
    Such sisterly memories. Wonderful story telling. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 7:10:00 AM
    enjoyed reading! funny!!

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 6:23:00 AM
    you pulled a fast one Andrea.... ...congrats on your win...love...Joseph

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 6:09:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Frank's "A Childhood Memory" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 6:40:00 PM
    Very cute and funny and you have a nice sister! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 3:16:00 PM
    My sister always reminds me of how I was careless enough to get caught for doing the same thing she did. What was that, you ask? :)

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 9:09:00 AM
    naughty, naughty andie... i used to pick some alphabets and put them on my plate... charming piece.. soup mail! :)

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 9:04:00 AM
    lol, great fun, andrea. i knew those words, except for out of the loop - thanks for explaining.over here, we had tinned alphabet spaghetti - awful stuff, but my mum kept buying it

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