Sinking Freedom --Octelle

Freedom, you're on a sinking ship Blinded, tossed about, losing grip! Enemies laugh, as you drown With your flawed throne and false crown Be yourself! Open your eyes! Deceit has slipped through with lies! Freedom, you're on a sinking ship Blinded, tossed about, losing grip! All rights reserved cynthiabuhainbaello 11.28.12 *Octelle - poetry form of 8 lines aa-bb-cc-aa rhyme scheme, 88-77-77-88 syllable pattern, and uses personification & symbolism. The first 2 lines are repeated as the last 2 lines.