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Take me back to the cabin, cabin in my mind The place we go to be alone, I need cabin time. Only we can make it happen, we know where to go Take me back, oh take me back, I need you so The look you give me when it is cabin time A wink that says 'I want you' in the cabin in my mind Just the thought of your skin barely touching mine Makes me want you so much, I need cabin time Summers we go swimming, moonlight on skin. Campfire flames passion again and again Making love on beach makes our bodies glow Take me back, oh take me back, I need you so Winters we stay inside our rhythm making heat We love by the fireplace never missing a beat Our bodies keep us warm all through the night Only cabin time makes everything feel right Take me back to the cabin, cabin in my mind The place we go to be alone, I need cabin time Only we can make it happen, we know where to go Take me back, oh take me back, I need you so Revised from Cabin Time posted 1-15-2016 Simple Pleasures Contest by Kim Merryman Sixth Place

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Date: 2/3/2016 3:18:00 AM
Susan, Congrats on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/28/2016 7:41:00 AM
Hi Susan. Thank you for passing by to read my work. Congrats for your placement in this contest!!!! ;-)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/28/2016 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Teddy! Enjoyed.
Date: 1/28/2016 4:08:00 AM
What a pleasure to read Susan.. congrats on big win!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/28/2016 11:30:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/27/2016 8:18:00 AM
A 7 for sure! Congrats on your win with this fervently emotional write. Janice
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/28/2016 11:30:00 AM
Why thank you Janice! So appreciate your comments and a 7!
Date: 1/27/2016 12:04:00 AM
SUSAN, Congrats on your Simple Pleasure win. Hugs ** SKAT **
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/28/2016 11:28:00 AM
Thank you very much!
Date: 1/26/2016 4:39:00 PM
A romantic and lightly sensuous write! This could easily be turned into a song! Susan, congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for participating! Love, Kim
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/28/2016 11:27:00 AM
Thank you Kim for picking mine for placement and for the contest. It was fun and challenging.
Date: 1/18/2016 10:44:00 AM
Excellent composition. Best of Luck. Anisha D
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/28/2016 11:24:00 AM
Thank you Anisha!
Date: 1/17/2016 4:20:00 PM
what a lovely poem.. Flows so smoothly and using repitition really enhances the theme. BG
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/28/2016 11:23:00 AM
Thank you Barbara! Appreciate it.
Date: 1/17/2016 2:48:00 PM
I can't get away from your pleasurable cabin, Susan! gl in the contest. // paul
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/28/2016 11:32:00 AM
:) Great comment Paul. Thank you.
Date: 1/17/2016 12:10:00 PM
I love the great way you used repetition my friend. I often do that myself. Superb poetry, should do very well in that contest. A7
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/28/2016 11:22:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading and for such an awesome comment!
Date: 1/16/2016 7:07:00 PM
well, Susan, your simple pleasures make mine look quite tame!! GREAT job in the contest. I like how you used the repetition of cabin to emphasize its idea. Be careful you don't get cabin fever!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/28/2016 11:21:00 AM
:) Thanks Andrea! Yours is totally awesome as always.
Date: 1/16/2016 12:28:00 PM
It sounds idyllic Susan... such lovely romantic sensuous imagery !!! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/28/2016 11:16:00 AM
Thank you Jan! Appreciate your comments.
Date: 1/16/2016 12:23:00 PM
Susan, your cabin life sounds divine , excellent write
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/28/2016 11:16:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 1/16/2016 12:22:00 PM
a treasure of happy moments which make life truly spectacular, susan..huggs
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/27/2016 1:24:00 AM
Thank you, nette!

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