Haiku X3

silver leaf moon light white clouds passing quickly by..... winter's slumber nears misty rains approach standing proud amid the wind.... a silent red wood bare branches piled high nestled slumber for a time... dreams of springtime flow ________________________ CONTEST

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:35:00 AM

clever haiku

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/8/2010 3:36:00 AM

Congrats, Rick! Enjoyed your image-laden haiku very much! -- nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2010 8:32:00 PM

these are very nice and descriptive. Congratulations.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/5/2010 3:02:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your win in the Haiku contest with these great expressions in Haiku.. very visual .. enjoy your win tonight with luv...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/5/2010 12:48:00 PM

Rick, Congratulations and thanks for supporting my contest. I had lots of fun running this contest,.p.d.

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/5/2010 12:44:00 PM

lovely entry, congrats on your win in the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2010 12:20:00 PM

Congratulations Rick on your win in P.D.'s contest *Going Haiku Crazy*. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/5/2010 12:19:00 PM

Congratulations on this well deserved win, Rick

Skat A

Date: 10/4/2010 10:37:00 AM

enjoyed your poem Rick, good luc in the contest*LUV~SKAT

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 10/2/2010 2:03:00 PM

A lovely haiku series, very visual. Hard to pick a fav, but I love the moon so the first one really captures my imagination. Best wishes for the contest ~ Sharon :)

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/27/2010 1:06:00 PM

Great images of fall, Rick. I really like the third verse especially -- the branches are piled high in the yard and the bonfire will be held on Halloween! Here's your invitation. Diane

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/27/2010 1:02:00 PM

This is brilliant, Rick! I'm assuming it's for the contest. In which case, wish you good luck and also I join Carolyn wishing you best of luck in your endeavors and most of all blessings in your field of work...Peace, love, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/27/2010 11:15:00 AM

What a terrific haiku -- brilliant imagery of the silver glow the moon casts on the earth below. Great work, Rick! Love, Carolyn (And it's so good to see you posting again. I'm pulling for you to get that certification!)

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/27/2010 11:09:00 AM

beautiful haiku

Skat A

Date: 9/27/2010 10:32:00 AM

LOVELY HAIKU, ENJOYED THE READ! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT