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A Distant Silver Afternoon

sighed she. extending limbed memories above bare-faced daring.. the sea sips her body held as is in space, caressing the hidden haunts of woman on yet another day floating content, solitary 'bove white horses riding time to a distant silver afternoon .. a path trills the tumbling pebbled shore where upturned timbers - hoarse of caulking care, creak old sea-salts' ditties, as birds exotic shriek their hunger.. secreted would-be lovers smile then quench their thirst.. moon blushes its face before casting a voyeur's sleek shadow 'pon the She, the He bathed in light..

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Date: 2/14/2018 6:51:00 AM
I seem to see a few frames from the film about sad and dispelled love.
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Emma Green
Date: 2/14/2018 12:59:00 PM
I love people's interpretatons, and you are so near the truth. For me, just me perhaps.. when i look at water - sea or ocean.. and the sun is shining down on it so fondly... it seems to blush silver.. and for me - that's magical.
Date: 4/29/2016 11:50:00 AM
a beautiful poem, Emma, the imagery is delightful. skat
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Emma Green
Date: 2/14/2018 1:00:00 PM
Such kind words.. again, thank you so very much. I live in the middle of nowhere but ten miles from the sea.. lucky me, a foot in two worlds!

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