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Silently - We - Discover - Love

Silently ~ we ~ discover ~ love Silently floating on a lily pad softly atop twilight waters, drifting a wind swept current meandering between pine needle shores we gather moon beams, wishfully gazing upon reflections of stardust tapestries saturating cosmic dreams, as the two of us discover whispering ripples flowing, formed of heartbeat echoes, tranquil rhythms weaving through the serenity of the night in quiet persuasions of love Good Night Soupers

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Date: 1/5/2017 8:12:00 AM
If I had been awake, I'd silently have wished you Good Night
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Chris Green
Date: 1/5/2017 10:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Darren, what a nice thing to say.
Date: 1/5/2017 3:51:00 AM
- A beautiful poem that brings delight, Chris - A stylish and clean layout - I say good morning :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 1/5/2017 10:02:00 AM
Ho there Anne-Lise. Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 1/5/2017 3:07:00 AM
Whispering ripples flowing-I can hear them..to gather moonbeams...I can see that...In silence discovering love...That's a beautiful feeling..Silence indeed reveals so much of what once feel...Awesome ..Beautiful..Goodnight.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/5/2017 10:02:00 AM
I am happy you could feel this one Charmaine. Thank you once again for the smile I am wearing.
Date: 1/4/2017 9:14:00 PM
WOW...What a great slow ya down and put ya to bed beauty of a night time story.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/5/2017 10:01:00 AM
Thanks John, happy to help your day end slow and easy. :)
Date: 1/4/2017 9:00:00 PM
I love how you have done the format in this poem. Quite special indeed! Love it, Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 1/5/2017 10:00:00 AM
Thanks Rick, I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 1/4/2017 8:32:00 PM
What a cosmic work! Good job! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Chris Green
Date: 1/5/2017 10:00:00 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting Matthew
Date: 1/4/2017 6:47:00 PM
This is so beautiful, Chris! Even the reading asked for reverence... loved it. A great night to you...
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Chris Green
Date: 1/5/2017 10:00:00 AM
Thank you so very much Claudia.

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