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Silence, She Keeps Me Awake

Silence. Silence, she keeps me awake with words unspoken, Yet the voice does not go unheard. A distinct patter sounds in my gut, A shot ringing in the empty confines where words don't exist. Words don't exist. Made up to explain the thoughts and feelings that burn within, Yet made up to hide the thoughts and feelings the same. Stripped bare, emptiness allows truth to echo within. The ping and the patter, The shot in the gut, The words unspoken ring like a round in a rut.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/10/2016 1:17:00 AM
Hi Mike, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 10/20/2015 6:27:00 PM
very nicely written. Thanks for reading/ liking my Happness poem about cinnabuns. I seen an ad for them so I wrote :)
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Date: 10/14/2015 5:27:00 PM
Dear Mike A. A very deeply felt and well expressed poem here my friend, some time I will come back and read more of your stuff you have a real talent my friend, great job and thanks for your comment on my poetry also, take care and have a great weekend cheri d.
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