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Sight, Scent and Sound

spring snowballs in bloom busy bees hum drowsy tunes school will be out soon...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2013 6:55:00 PM

Tim, a very sweet and lovely win :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Cherry Blossom Haiku" contest. Your poem is awesome with imagery. always & forever-LINDA

Ray Dillard

Date: 4/21/2013 10:35:00 PM

I enjoyed your haiku! Hope you had a wonderful trip! RAY

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/21/2013 1:49:00 AM

Many congratulations Tim xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2013 11:27:00 PM

oh that is so delightful about the spring snowballs. Love it. And congrats on your win.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/20/2013 7:21:00 PM

Congrad's Light & Love

Joseph May

Date: 4/20/2013 5:04:00 PM

congrats on your win Tim....I like the snowball line..

Kathryn Collins

Date: 4/13/2013 8:39:00 AM

I remember that ants in my pants feeling. love, Kathy

Heather Ober

Date: 4/12/2013 7:18:00 AM

Gorgeous haiku, Tim! I love the rhyme too ;)

Jayne Eggins

Date: 4/12/2013 4:44:00 AM

A lovely Haiku thoroughly enjoyed the read and thank you for the kind comments on my poems they are much appreciated sincerely Jayne

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/12/2013 3:22:00 AM

- Hooray for school free, sunshine and spring! - Well done Tim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/12/2013 1:45:00 AM

This is amazing. So melodious Tim.

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/11/2013 10:32:00 PM

This is a very wondrous rhyming Haiku! I loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What an enlightening piece, you've written a write that reminds me of elementary school days, ah the innocence of that time period, Awesome Work!!