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Shodden Down-Trodden

My shoes lie prone like dogs waiting for a new adventure Will it be a soft seashore shuffle? A jaunt through the mall, all dusty with grime A plunge to tippy-toe into mud and puddles A climb up a tree or hike up mountain slopes A skip through playgrounds with the kids A ride up an escalator, what a relief! All polished and shined, a first date in mind A twirl around dance floor, avoiding soft toes Laced up tightly and properly for business date, late Or pounding the pavement for shopping walk jaunt A stroll through the park on soft green grass, fresh mown. Finally to relax off-feet, in lounge room, at last we're home, Before shoes shed, get bedded in closet with friends, Who share tales and tongue wags with the shodden down-trodden.

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Date: 8/17/2017 3:13:00 AM
Intriguing topic! I very much liked the metaphorical image applied to your shoes.
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John Anderson
Date: 8/17/2017 1:55:00 PM
Thanks for your comment. Very much appreciated. Cheers
Date: 8/16/2017 4:15:00 PM
How exciting to be your shoes! Those tongues must wag constantly in your closet! Nice poem.
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Date: 8/16/2017 8:57:00 AM
Nice hyperbole.
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John Anderson
Date: 8/16/2017 12:19:00 PM
Thanks for the comment
Date: 8/16/2017 8:22:00 AM
Hi John: A great poetic theme ,Your shoes are a small biography. Great Write!
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