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Weighing a Smile

When weighing a smile you measure its worth against the odds of its sincerity. Passion and desire fuel hearts on fire and yet, fickle flames sometimes flicker out. Salvaging fragments of shattered ego you suddenly feel quite vulnerable. And donning your mask of obscurity you seamlessly slip into the shadows. (Blank Verse) 6/17/2015

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Date: 6/22/2015 5:26:00 AM
strong deep pen of wisdom Emile hugs 7
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Date: 6/22/2015 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Shadow, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/18/2015 5:11:00 PM
Brilliant, wise write from a wise poet........A.M.
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Date: 6/19/2015 8:37:00 AM
Thanks Afolabi, I appreciate your friendly visits. Emile.
Date: 6/18/2015 4:24:00 PM
love the painting very dramatic, wisdom in it's lines. Hugs eve 7
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Date: 6/19/2015 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your visits and friendly words of support. Emile.
Date: 6/18/2015 11:28:00 AM
Wise and thought provoking, Emile...donning your mask of conformity...this happens too often. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 6/18/2015 4:18:00 PM
Thanks Rhonda, I appreciate your friendly words of support. Emile.
Date: 6/18/2015 6:05:00 AM
Excellent and so true. I didn't want it to end. so much wisdom in your words. well done. Pete. 7.
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Date: 6/18/2015 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Peter, I appreciate your kind words of support. Emile.
Date: 6/18/2015 12:07:00 AM
You can measure the worth of this poem by the weight of the first Stanza alone, Emile. Great write- very profound. Regards, Viv
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Date: 6/18/2015 8:07:00 AM
Thanks Vic, I appreciate your kind words of support. Emile.
Date: 6/17/2015 4:48:00 PM
brings on deep thoughts....very good...as usual
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Date: 6/17/2015 5:14:00 PM
Thanks Judy, you know how much I appreciate your candor. Emile.

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