Get Your Premium Membership

She Exits the Shower, Again

She exits the shower As I towel her down Her long blond hair Skin so brown With her back to me In masterly strokes Every part I caress Her wanting stokes She takes my hands To her breasts she cups Our torso's close In standing up She bares her nape Invites me to kiss As my blood responds To my manly bliss This path of passion We tenderly follow Our bodies racing As we lovingly wallow We lie on the bed Two adventurers roam Exploring new worlds To eventually find home Sensual finds As they make their way A pillar of strength Through a secret gate, plays Curvaceous mounds With pert like cairns Forested grasses Wonderment stare Through the open gate In this warm moist land Signals in sync As we read our commands In movement so tender With sighs and groans Between the V As he's welcomed home In rhythmic rhyme Their music plays Notes are hit In orchestral display Kisses shared Bodies slide Hearts content In sensual glide Eruption emits His lava flow Tanned maiden Golden glow Orgasmic glands Climax embrace In their world of love This two have graced . UNSUPPORTED CODE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/13/2014 7:25:00 PM
You got it going on Hoss. Sweet memories your write evokes and in it is advice how to treat a lady and give her what both want. Always a great path to take!
Login to Reply
Fraser Avatar
James Fraser
Date: 9/23/2014 3:35:00 PM
Thank you Robert. It's amazing what the mind can conjure without living themes and scenes. Thank you kindly for your always support, James :)
Date: 9/13/2014 6:21:00 PM
so seductive James hot and as steamy as the shower - you write these poems so exquisitely my friend with great imagery:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Login to Reply
Fraser Avatar
James Fraser
Date: 9/23/2014 3:28:00 PM
Don't you love it when so few words can conjure up so many images as if the reader has lived them, whatever the theme. Now that's magic us poets & writers deliver. Thank you kindly Jan. I must get ones imagination going again ;) xxx
Date: 9/13/2014 5:21:00 PM
Like the play of words love the stanza with a home... A steamy hot alluring poem..:) I have one like this try reading: seducing melody..:)
Login to Reply
Fraser Avatar
James Fraser
Date: 9/23/2014 3:12:00 PM
Apart my Dark & Fantasy poems, I do enjoy writing steamy writes. The wonderful thing about being in love, is the adventurous moments that can be lived, cherished by both. That's true love amidst life that's lived in chowa/harmony. Glad you liked it Petitte Poetess, James x :)
Date: 9/13/2014 5:07:00 PM
There are some great lines mixed with some great rhymes in this most deletable poem, nicely done James!
Login to Reply
Fraser Avatar
James Fraser
Date: 9/23/2014 3:01:00 PM
Many thanks Sebastian, James :)
Date: 9/13/2014 4:53:00 PM
racy!
Login to Reply
Shetley Avatar
Thvia Shetley
Date: 9/13/2014 5:00:00 PM
lucky lady then!
Fraser Avatar
James Fraser
Date: 9/13/2014 4:56:00 PM
In reality, simple words, in relation to the reality!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things