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Serendipity of a Lost Soul

Burned by dawn of brand new light I drift back into primal night to find upon my dreams a dance in wait to be restored by chance.

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Shane Thacker

Date: 4/30/2024 3:44:00 PM

Such a powerful impact in a small poem. Very nicely done, Kate.

Kate Davies
Date: 5/3/2024 4:30:00 AM

Thanks Shane, much appreciated :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/30/2024 10:40:00 AM

Dear Kate, your lyric is full of enchanting yet pensive imagery dancing lightly upon a lilting lyrical flow. A short piece that packs a big punch! Lots to appreciate and ponder here.. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kate Davies
Date: 5/3/2024 4:30:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely feedback Susan:)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/30/2024 7:12:00 AM

Dear Kate, you have wonderfully captured the bittersweet journey of rediscovery amid the shadows of the past. You eloquently speak to the hope of finding peace and renewal in unexpected moments, that even in darkness, serendipity can guide us toward light. Blessings, Daniel

Kate Davies
Date: 5/2/2024 10:40:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely feedback Daniel, and support as always :)

Chris Con

Date: 4/29/2024 4:25:00 PM

You could be a very successful vlogger. So enchanting engaging and intimate ... Don't hesitate.

Kate Davies
Date: 4/29/2024 9:54:00 PM

Thanks Chris for such kind words, I don't think I could film myself, much too awkward!! I did think of recording them as I will always read my poems aloud to get the tone and the flow I want when writing :)